Guest Post from Jessica Zellman, author of Odonata: City of Night
From Adri:
Jes has been amazing from the start. She’s also made me want to throttle her on several occasions. Editors both love and hate a smart author: love them because they learn quickly and turn out amazing books, hate them because they usually need a better reason for editorial changes than “Because I’m the editor and I said so.” Jes made me answer a lot of questions, but in return she threw herself into producing the best book she could and came up with some amazing results. She’s smart, she’s savvy, her sense of humor puts my sarcastic brown butt to shame, and I know the sequel to City of Night will be even better than the first.
And she teaches me fascinating facts about things with exoskeletons. Who wouldn’t love that?
Thankfully, Katrina doesn’t have segmented legs or multifaceted eyes – but she’s still as beautiful and graceful as a dragonfly, and as deadly as you never knew the odonata could be.
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Guest Post from Jessica Zellman, author of Odonata: City of Night
The idea for Odonata: City of Night literally buzzed past me while I sat in my backyard one summer afternoon. I had just finished reading a godawful vampire book (which shall remain nameless) and the feminist in me was on a rampage. Why were the vampire protagonists always male and so much more powerful than their young, naïve, human lovers? I wanted a kickass leading lady. Not a vampire hunter. That’s already been done by writers I admire. I considered a female vampire interested in a human male, but that didn’t seem original enough either. I wanted my characters to be equals, or at least on the same playing field.
Then a mosquito bit my arm.
Everyone hates mosquitoes. Nasty little bloodsuckers. It occurred to me that they are just mini-vampires, flying around, sucking people’s blood. On the other hand, I love dragonflies. They’re pretty and amazing to watch, and they eat mosquitoes. So what if there was a supernatural predator who, like a dragonfly, ate vampires? I did some research on dragonflies and found the Latin group name for my favorite insect: Odonata. “Oh-done-ah-tah.” That just sounds cool.
I read somewhere that dragonflies can’t move until the morning sun hits them. It made sense for a vampire predator to be a creature of the sun as opposed to vampires, creatures of the night.
My main character, Katrina, came to me pretty quickly after that. I imagined her standing in the bright Los Angeles sunlight, red hair blazing like a fiery sunset. She looked at me with intense blue eyes and said, “Vampires believe themselves to be the ultimate predators, but they aren’t. I am.”
To which my only response could be, “Okay then, let’s go.”
To my readers, I hope you enjoy the ride. City of Night is just the beginning.
And to Adri, thanks for being the best editor ever and for letting me take over your blog for a day.
-Jes
Guest Post From Steampunk Author Elysabeth Williams
Random reflections regarding my recent release, The Electrifying Exploits of the English Three.
Elysabeth Williams
First things first. (Wait, why do we say that? Why wouldn’t first things be first? Would first things ever be last? What’s the point? First things in the middle… no wait, that doesn’t make any sense either.) Never mind, I’m moving along. That’s the last time I’m using a title as long as The Electrifying Exploits of the English Three. I loved it when I was writing; everyone ooh’d and aah’d over its neatness. I’m not entirely sure how I came up with it, for those who’ve asked me before. I just started thinking of what the book was about. Exploits. Three English women. There’s a lot of electrical stuff involved. Then it just sort of hit me. Alliteration is my friend. Usually.
I am proud of thinking of it, but when you get to the editing phase of publication, that title follows you around everywhere. Adri and I stretched the limitations of the ability to name a file. Who knew there was a character limit? I didn’t. Woops. For a while, we used EEE3 instead. It stuck as a nickname, actually. Even on Twitter, I’m tempted to use EEE3 so it will fit. Then people asked me what the hell I was talking about. And when you’re obsessing over numbers and reviews, you have to google it often. That’s a lot of typing. Thank goodness for predictive text. (For once.)
As for the writing of the EEE3, the characters came to me in a non-standard way. Generally, when I think of something to write, I have this scene in my head, then I expound on it. What is going on in the scene? Where are they? Who is involved? What’s their name, motive, clothing, etc?
With these characters, I had actual people in mind. They originally started out loosely based on me and two other friends who would occasionally meet for coffee and have laughs. On Twitter, we would chat about how our kids were driving us to the brink of climbing clock towers. Somehow, it morphed into someone climbing the clock tower, someone being in charge of bringing the coffee, someone else bringing the ammo, and then scheduling it just so we would be home on time to meet our children at the bus stop. It was a mad day online. No, of course we don’t condone taking out your aggressions of general anxiety by climbing the local tower and picking people off. It was just ‘one of those days.’ Please don’t send me hate mail.
For some reason, the conversation stuck with me and it somehow melded into the English Three’s story. The witty, wild trio just trying to do their job sensibly – no matter what the job entailed.
The Three include Jillian – the daughter of the proprietor of the most exclusive and elusive club in London, Miss Merriweather’s. She’s managed to dodge the marriage bullet her friends had not time to dodge. She enjoys tea, whist with her friends, and leisurely walks in the park.
Then we have Miriam – the wife of an abusive, controlling alcoholic who is responsible for gambling away their title and land. She enjoys coffee, quiet talks with her friends, and indexing ways of how to off her husband.
Lastly, we have Eliza – the estranged wife of an older gentleman. She keeps a house in the city while he tries to lure her away to the country, to no avail. Eliza prefers being alone in London, *cough* balls, and the company of others.
The men are somewhat condensed. One is a rake, one is a gentleman, and one is a mystery.
I did enjoy writing this piece more than others did. It seemed to flow easy until I got to the revising part. That was kind of painful. But don’t tell Adri – I did like being able to pick this thing apart and put it back together. Painful yes, but very well worth it.
Thanks for reading!
E.
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From Adri: All I can say is that I wish I’d known about the clock tower daydreams before I…er…tastefully suggested revisions to the manuscript. I might have been a little more delicate. And worn kevlar. ~coughs~
Guest Post From Ashley Christman
From Adri:
I’m back from my temporary absence from the face of the Internet, and bringing you another Lyrical release: Ashley Christman’s The Witching Hour. One reason I love this book is the diversity – both of its characters, and its author. Even if Ashley and I argued incessantly about how to describe Tuesday Peters’ skin, there’s no denying that she’s something I love: a strong heroine who portrays a woman of color as a valid protagonist in a mainstream novel. Even though she gets her looks from her divine powers and not her heritage, Tuesday definitely stands out…and not just because of her color. She’s fun, sassy, determined to solve her sister’s murder, and brimming with a magical dose of sexiness that’ll curl anyone’s toes.
Plus, check out Wednesday Peters on the cover. Isn’t that thing (the cover, not Wednesday) freakin’ gorgeous?
Guest Post From Ashley: Where Did Originality Disappear To?
First of all, I want to thank Adrien for giving me this opportunity.
In researching The Witching Hour, I found myself not only choosing various pagan gods, but going back and reading stories about them. What I found in doing so was a rich tradition of story-telling not so different from what writers do today, that is, the ancients were taking themes and tales that already existed and putting their own spin on it.
We often hear people saying there is no such thing as an original idea anymore. In my research, I found that if you want to say there’s no such thing as an original idea anymore, you’d have to say there was never any such thing as an original idea. Since the beginning of time there have been several themes that resonates in each of us. Themes that have been a part of our lives since we were children.
For example, in The Witching Hour, the theme is a modern take on heroism and the conflict is man vs. god(s).
I took the idea of a hero like Perseus or Hercules, who were both sent on epic quests meant to test their fortitude by the gods, and made it something relevant to today. I also stripped the gods of their infinite powers and gave the power to the humans being tested. In doing so, I think I’ve managed to create a believable conflict of man vs. god(s).
But again, this is a theme that is ever present in books and movies, what I’ve done is just managed to give it my own spin.
The point is this–no, there are no original ideas, but there will always be original spins on old ideas.
Tragically Late: Guest Post from Liz Darvill, Author of BOUND BY BLOOD
Note from Adri: Working with Liz has been a hilarious comedy of errors from day one right up until her release date, when this blog was supposed to go up…until she got stranded in Austin, and right after that I got locked out of my blog for ages. To apologize she decided to write about how much she loves her editor instead of pimping her newly-released book, BOUND BY BLOOD, as much as she should (AHEM); in revenge, before I let you see that I’m going to write about how much I love my author(s), and pimp her book for her.
Liz is nuts. Plain and simple. And the fun thing about her is that she doesn’t do anything by halves. The published version of BOUND BY BLOOD isn’t even remotely the same book as the original sub. For starters, it’s 36k shorter. That’s not just a cut; it’s an amputation.
When I sent Liz her edits, I wasn’t expecting a full rewrite…but she gave me one anyway, and dove into it with the fun and whimsy I’ve come to expect from her. We weren’t always on time, primarily thanks to every last piece of technology between us conspiring to eat, shred, lose, and otherwise destroy half our emails…but we had one hell of a crazy time that involved sexy werewolves singing show tunes, bad jokes about Googling herself, and the two of us bandying half-serious threats back and forth on Twitter. Liz has been a delight to work with, and BOUND BY BLOOD has been a fun ride. She also has a few books coming out with Harlequin, so I’d keep an eye out for her.
You may also take note of the links strewn throughout the post, and make with the clicky-clicky. C’mon. You know you want to.
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Liz:
So, I was a very bad author and was gone during the release of my urban fantasy, Bound by Blood, I also totally owed my BRILLIANT editor a blog….so this is my attempt at making amends and pimping my book at the same time. *grin*
Five reasons I love my editor:
1) He asked me which color hi-lighter I wanted him to use to…ehem…artfully and constructively tear apart my manuscript. In case you are wondering…I went with purple…it might as well be pretty right? Although I am pretty sure it looked like Barney the Dinosaur bled all over my manuscript by the time he was done with it.
2) He put lovely comments about “werewolf morning wood” in my manuscript…which led to me spewing coffee all over my laptop…through my nose…
3) He was constantly patient and understanding, even when my computer set out to doom us all.
4) He took my April fools joke about turning my dark urban fantasy into a musical featuring Tom Jones songs and my alpha hero Bryce wearing a sequined shirt…without murdering me.
5) He also hasn’t murdered me with his red pen, despite the fact I may have been stranded during my book’s release and didn’t supply him with a guest blog.
In all seriousness, I owe a great deal to Adrien for all the amazing insight, patience and help he provided me with throughout the process of editing Bound by Blood, and I am so proud of the finished product. So thank you Adrien! *passes you some Kona coffee, with a side of rum*
Now…that I have successfully groveled at my editor’s feet….*grin* I am going to pimp my book! If you enjoy urban fantasy, vampires, hot biting, lots of action packed gun fights, then you might want to check out Bound by Blood!
In war, the greatest battle is love.
Vampire Mila Deluca is as powerful in magic as her trigger-finger is quick.
Pack leader Bryce D’Angelo is as sexy a warrior as he is deadly.
Two equally powerful species, the vampires and lycans are natural enemies. Yet when Mila and Bryce’s lives collide in the midst of a world filled with chaos an uneasy alliance is formed. Together, they must right wrongs and impart justice in the face of a dangerous evil…even as they fight against the connection between them that turns to something far deeper than mere lust.
Mila and Bryce must become bound by blood before they face a final show down that will decide the fate of the world.
Content warning: strong language, hot sex and plenty of biting
Thanks for letting me stop by…even though I was tragically late!
~Elizabeth Darvill
www.elizabethdarvill.com
Rogue’s Curse: Happy Release Day!
I’m about to embarrass the hell out of Jason Beymer. He deserves it.
You know what day this is, right? Of course you do. It’s the release day for Rogue’s Curse, Jason Beymer’s debut novel, available from Lyrical Press. (For only $5.50. My lunch costs more than that. C’mon. It’s worth it.)
Seeing this book debut is like watching my firstborn child leave for their first day of school. If I had a firstborn child. If I wasn’t as child-friendly as an uncovered electrical socket. The point is, when a book is published its successful release isn’t just the pride of the author and his family, friends, and demon minions. It’s the pride of all the people who worked on it: the copy/content editor(me!), their senior editor(s), the line editors, the cover artist, the production manager, the review coordinator…the list goes on and on. It’s a group effort, one where the author is central but not entirely alone in their investment in the book. There’s a whole team of people who care about that book, who take pride in its success.
I definitely take pride in Rogue’s Curse, and in Jason.
It’s only by random chance that I ended up working on this book. I’ve only been with Lyrical Press for about six months now; before that I was working as a freelance editor. When I first started I was told I’d be taking on some previously contracted authors they thought would be a good fit for me, until I started to pick my own from the slush pile. So here I was, several books already on my list, all of them interesting, exciting, fun. Apparently my senior editor gauged my tastes well, because I’ve yet to edit a single book that I didn’t love.
Jason, though…Jason was my first.
I’ll be honest: I didn’t know what to expect. I was used to authors coming to me as a contractor, hiring me because they trust my expertise, and generally placing the reins in my hands. The relationship works a little differently when you work for a publisher. I’d heard horror stories about dealing with difficult authors on the publisher’s side: everything from delayed releases caused by author meltdowns to month-long arguments over non-conventional apostrophe use as visual art. In truth, I expected Jason to be a nightmare. Arrogant, stubborn, utterly lacking in common sense, and refusing to budge on so much as a misspelled word or a godawful pet phrase.
Instead he proved why you should never make assumptions or believe stereotypes.
His sense of humor caught me from the first page of Rogue’s Curse, and proved utterly infectious – to the point where my senior editor made me tone down my silly comments when I left editorial notes throughout the book. (I believe there was something in there about Godzilla and octogenarian poontang.) Before I’d even really had a significant dialogue with him, I learned to like him through his book, his characters, his humor, his storytelling, his style – but I learned to value him from an editorial perspective when I sent his first round of edits back. Rather than whine about the amount of work asked of him or argue that his book was perfect as-is, he threw himself wholeheartedly into editing with all the enthusiasm and professionalism anyone could hope for.
Not only that, but he took my questions about plot points and went one step further: he refined the entire story to the point where it was practically a new book. Rather than viewing criticism as a negative point, he instead used it as a jumping-off point to come up with some wildly creative solutions that more than proved his talent and ingenuity. Sometimes I almost couldn’t keep up with him as he spun through ideas, changes, and cheesy one-liners that left me spraying diet coke at my screen on an alarmingly regular basis. His wife, too, has a wonderfully sharp eye; she was always there, looking over Jason’s shoulder and catching that one letter out of place that neither of us noticed after staring at the manuscript for the eleventy-millionth time.
Oh, there were a few points of contention. A few things had to be deleted for the sake of house rules, and darlings (and sheep) had to die. There was a particularly knotty wrangle about italics that left us both so confused we didn’t know if we were coming or going, but we never wanted to see another verbalized sound effect in our lives. Renee, She Who Commands All, nearly killed me over a slight oversight on the cover text. (Seriously, never make a pregnant woman angry. I swear I found three more grey hairs the next day.) Jason had to be threatened with a ruler across the knuckles if he didn’t stop picking at things that were already tweaked to the point of exhaustion. He’s a bit of a perfectionist, in case you can’t tell. He’s also paranoid, neurotic, and utterly hilarious when he starts biting his nails over every tiny little thing. One of these days he’s going to stress himself to a heart attack. I’m probably callous enough to point and laugh. I’m an editor. It’s what we do. All part of crushing your spirit and destroying your artistic vision.
Ahem. Back on topic. More than anything, Jason is a witty, fun, engaging person, and a wonderful author to work with. Just by being himself and dedicating himself to polishing his book, he made my investment in Rogue’s Curse personal. He proved that when an author and editor work together rather than against each other, a good book can transform into a great one. We may not be friends, but I’m damned happy to be his editor.
Maybe if Jason hadn’t been my first author, I wouldn’t love working for a publisher so much. Maybe if Jason hadn’t been such a delight to work with, I would have doused myself in holy water and run screaming back to the freelance life and my private client roster. But “maybe” never happened, and I consider myself lucky that out of all the contracted books pending editorial assignment, my senior editor decided to send Jason (and my other starting authors, because yes, I love you all) to me.
So thank you, Jason. Thank you for being my first Lyrical author, for being wonderful, and for trusting me with your next book, Nether.
Thank you, and happy release day for Rogue’s Curse.
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Now excuse me. I need to go drown something small and fluffy before people start thinking I’m human.


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